Saturday, May 3

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  1. I just wanted to say that I really like your blog..
    and I like the metathors and pictures you use to describe something.

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  2. woow...deep expression, can feel the pain ,literally..it is all laced in the words you used..am inspired because I too love to write and poetry doesn't pass me by

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    1. I'm glad I was able to inspire you, I'd love to read some of your poetry if you have any you'd like to share sometime.

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  3. love the poem you are a very good and talented writer i have to say your words run smoothly with every-thing you say keep up the good work

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    1. Thank you so much Erie, I appreciate it, as always! :) I hope you're doing well!

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  4. Dang. I like this. The beginning was just jumping around fuzzily in my head but it all came together in the last few stanzas when your personal voice became stronger. Well done.

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  5. Wow, this is breathtaking! You write so beautifully. :)

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